Peer Review #5

Peer Review – Jonas Camilleri

“Hello there, Jonas! What a lovely creative entry. I love how you contrast the moon’s cold and stony appearance by personifying it with a much warmer and compassionate nature as seen with its sympathy towards Cordelia. Exclaimed phrases such as “Oh my, what a catastrophe!” and “Oh the irony!” give your personification a more dramatic flair which adds flavour and expands the personality of the moon. A truly lovely and bittersweet creative writing piece on the moon’s lament. Great work!”

Shakespeare Blog Post 5

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